I have a few things that need edits before this lovely fella is good to go:
- Finned crest extends beyond the neck currently, which it cannot do.
- I don’t spot Shimmer. If the freckles are intended to be Shimmer, they must look a bit more like sparkles.
You have two weeks from today to make corrections, but if you need an extension again, feel free to ask!
How long can the fins extend beyond their 'roots'? I have it kind of like a horse's mane where the attached part ends just before the shoulders, and the fins trail down to where they are. I can definitely make the fins shorter, or make it more obvious where the attached part ends.... I realize now I didn't do the stripes on the fin properly to reflect this.
Hmm.. the freckles are indeed supposed to be shimmer. I'll have to see what I can do to make them sparkle a bit more~
The fins can extend beyond their roots in a way that flows naturally for the structure. Your lineart does make it appear as though the attached portion of the crest continues till the end of the shoulders, but it should cut off before them.
LittleWren
Egg ID: FE109
2025-11-05 15:03:56
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CertainlyCervine Staff Member
Heya - This egg has ben reserved for you! Sorry about the wait. You'll have until the 10th of July to submit a design for this egg ^^
2026-06-26 18:36:52
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LittleWren
I can't figure out any other way to submit a design for this fellow..^^
https://www.deviantart.com/stash/01ux6z1ma9c7
(Was given an extension til the 17th due to being sick~)
2026-07-12 16:48:18
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Doom Staff Member
I have a few things that need edits before this lovely fella is good to go:
- Finned crest extends beyond the neck currently, which it cannot do.
- I don’t spot Shimmer. If the freckles are intended to be Shimmer, they must look a bit more like sparkles.
You have two weeks from today to make corrections, but if you need an extension again, feel free to ask!
2026-07-21 20:41:22
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LittleWren
How long can the fins extend beyond their 'roots'? I have it kind of like a horse's mane where the attached part ends just before the shoulders, and the fins trail down to where they are. I can definitely make the fins shorter, or make it more obvious where the attached part ends.... I realize now I didn't do the stripes on the fin properly to reflect this.
Hmm.. the freckles are indeed supposed to be shimmer. I'll have to see what I can do to make them sparkle a bit more~
2026-07-21 22:55:27 (Edited 2026-07-21 22:58:38)
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Doom Staff Member
The fins can extend beyond their roots in a way that flows naturally for the structure. Your lineart does make it appear as though the attached portion of the crest continues till the end of the shoulders, but it should cut off before them.
2026-07-22 15:21:40
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LittleWren
https://www.deviantart.com/stash/010l1i10ieqf
Here's some edited lineart without the markings and on a dark background; would something like that do? ^v^
2026-07-23 23:09:19
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LittleWren
I've got a sketch posted in the design help channel on discord; I've been sick, so I've been very slow lately. ^^;
2026-07-05 15:51:54
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